Sunday, January 21, 2007

Descriptive Paragraph

Something I Dread
Night falls upon the powerless world as the sun sets into the distant horizons. I lay in warmth and comfort as I set sail into the many possibilities of my wondering thoughts in deep slumber. But I find myself wasting in sighs unable to drift off into a field of dreams. I'm sorrounded in pitch black darkness. I fear. I gaze blankly at the empty rooftop of my box of silence. Hopelessly, I shift to my left. I soon face the terror. The big white entranceway to an unknown universe. Unknown creatures may lay behind it. A small brass circular lever, the only way in. I stare at it closely. I thought I saw it move. I shut my eyes to try to forget. I hear it creak. My heart pounds like a thousand drums beating on my chest. I hood myself with a bulky square of fluffiness. I hear it creak again. I'm shaken in freight. I quickly snatch the cord on the rugged floor. I wedge it into the wall. This bright shine oversomes everything. This diamond shaped glass filled with pink soothing bubbles flowing up and down. This special light calms me down. I soon fall into a deep, deep trance. This light, my savior.

1 comment:

Austin J said...

Your description of a brass "circular" lever makes me think of a door opening. It tells the shape. It sounds like a doorknob rotating. It's very, very descriptive and almost mysterious.