Descriptive Writing Assignment

My Descriptive Paragraph :
I thought I did a pretty good job on my descriptive paragraph. Some words that I thought were really descriptive were :

>big white entranceway
>small circular lever
>bulky square of fluffiness
--->I liked how I was able to bring simple objects to life by adding powerful adjectives to describe them.

My Blog Group Thingy :
Junior :
>black
>thorny
>closed cage
--->"The whole world just turned black when I heard that." I liked how he had described the whole world turning black. That created emotion & a little drama to this piece.
--->"I just grabbed the thorny papers and put it in my backpack." The word "thorny" really helped this line. It made me feel how homework is something you really don't want to do, but you still have to. Sort of a fear.

Rg :
>awfully angry bear
>my body budges
>my eyes stir
--->I liked how he used alot of powerful verbs such as "My body budges and turns and once again, my eyes stir." This was a line that really stood out for me. I liked how this was phrased. Instead of just describing someone who wanted to go back to sleep, he went into detail.